Here are some poems written by students that meet and/or exceed the rubric. As you read through the poem think, what do these poems have in common? Do I see or hear images as I read through them? Can you feel the emotion that the writer chose?

Slam Poem by Larissa

My name is electricity,

I run through nervous veins,

Charge the happiness in one’s

Soul

I will light up the earth

With my energy,

I will stampede cities

Lightening a battery to me

I who spark at the flick of a switch

 

Moon Mana by Noel

As the moon ascends,

And our day ends,

We lay sleeping under an ocean of light,

That gives Mana to those in fright.

Even on her temporary off season, the moon gives you a reason.

Under her cloak of invisibility she waits,

Silently waiting for Helio her mate.

As she transforms back into a full,

The impatient people will no longer pull,

To see the joyous moon again.

When people see the breath taking view,

People who don’t lose their blue are few.

They absorb the light like a Mana thirsty Mo’o,

That makes observers go who’o

When Hina closes herself up like a sad flower,

We pray to the Akua for another night of Mana,…….or Power.


Earth by Dalton

Earth

Birthplace of the human race

Capable of great compassion

Water is how we survive

Air is our elixir

To keep us alive

My ohana is my life

Mana is like you carrying the sun

A species much like our oun

A deeper revelation dawns

aloha means a lot to me

Dependent like your heart

Fire is our blanket to keep us warm

Pono is like King Kamehameha

Peace like a waterfall

A courageous person is one who sacrifices

TIME

Reflection of Life by Joslynn  

Sometimes I’m dependent and I need my ohana

I am like the ocean and I have lots of mana

Feeling trapped in my life, so I revise

When I’m with my family, my love shines like light

I wish I wasn’t confused, I wish I could see

But I have a great reflection for my life on Maui

Love by Susan

Why?

Why am I so calm?

Is it from the energy in the tree, the sun?

What is it?

Why am I so exhausted?

Is it coming from too much aloha?

I need a conclusion!

I wonder if it’s from my ohana?

Where’s my data, I need to figure this out?

I’m getting hyped, worked up,

And I’m so close!

The love!

That’s it,

I get so much from it from everyone

You can’t not notice it.

And that’s why I’ll feel like this tomorrow and forever!

Mahalo.

Water Ohana by Jeremie

Water particles are an ohana

They work together and make waves

They blow bubbles when helio boils them

They work together to conduct electricity

They would be depressed if they were all alone

When they are exhausted, helio takes them to the sky

And creates clouds

When they’re infuriated

They drop back down filled with energy

Water molecules are very dependent on each other

And stay together with incredible mahalo

Cowboy Joe by Willie

I get really excited when I’m on a horse

To ride a bull you have to be tough

Be Strong

Use your mana!

I feel proud when my ohana cheers for me

Riding under the stars is the best

Be independent

Have fun!

A bucking bull is like riding a wave

A rough ocean, pounding over and over

Ask Akua for guidance

Ask Akua for safety

Dad helps me reflect on how I rode, what I did wrong.

He helps me improve to do better next time.